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Elizabeth Spring's avatar

Could feel this! And you might like this: https://open.substack.com/pub/whispersofthespirit/p/self-compassion?r=hjblj&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web&showWelcomeOnShare=true I actually don't know how to do a proper link....

Peter James Russell's avatar

Thank you, Elizabeth. Beautiful, and very nicely sustained. I find that hard. I don’t think I’ve ever written anything more than twelve lines.

Peter Mladinic's avatar

I like your clock-time pattern, images, and skillful rhymes.

Peter James Russell's avatar

Thank you again Peter. I think rhythm is where it all starts really, that and a good title. I like songs.

John Russell's avatar

Troon old course I would guess

Peter James Russell's avatar

Taken from the terrace of The Marine Hotel.